‘Aaahh-’ He was shaking her hand. ‘This is Mrs Striker of the Society for the Improvement of Wayward Women. Um — Detective Markson.’
Then Denton said he’d write a cheque; she said that would be very fine of him; Atkins took the dog away; and Markson said he would go. ‘Three o’clock today, sir?’
‘Oh, if I have to. Yes, all right — all right-’
Markson went down the stairs quickly, seeming light on his feet. Moments later, Denton heard Atkins close the front door on him.
Janet Striker was giggling. He’d never heard her giggle before; it was a minor revelation. He said, ‘I was afraid you’d mention the damned trunk.’
‘I know!’ She went off into laughter again, this time more boisterously. He thought perhaps he was seeing some sort of metamorphosis in her, the result of leaving the Society — maybe of leaving an entire way of life. ‘Is he gone?’
Denton looked out, didn’t see Markson, glanced up and down out of habit for Albert Cosgrove. ‘You brought a cab.’
‘I’m not about to carry the trunk to Euston station on my shoulder. Well!’ She laughed again. ‘That was fun.’
‘I have to go to New Scotland Yard at three to read that damned lunatic’s scribbles.’
‘I’ll be on my way back from Biggleswade by then. Did you get the drawing photographed?’
‘Atkins did, I hope.’ He turned to bellow for Atkins, found him standing ten feet away with the trunk in his arms.
‘Of course I did,’ Atkins said. ‘Prints ready tomorrow.’
‘Where’s the drawing?’
‘In the trunk.’
She interrupted, ‘We found it under most of the other things.’
‘I put it towards the bottom, with the sketchbook, madam.’
‘You’re a pearl of great price.’
Atkins smiled the gracious smile of royalty receiving tribute. ‘I’ll just put it in the cab.’
When he was gone, Denton said, ‘I’m losing my mind, between the book and these interruptions.’
‘No you’re not. You’re the sanest man I’ve ever known — also the best. There! You see what comes out when I’m contented.’
‘So I’m forgiven? Will you have dinner with me?’
‘Can’t — I’m having dinner with my solicitor. It’s all about money, mostly about when I get some from the lawsuit. I’m as poor as a church mouse, Denton — getting that money is important to me. What did Geddys say?’
‘Geddys. Geddys? Oh, dammit — I forgot-’ It seemed weeks ago that he’d said he’d talk to Geddys again about the man’s apparent lie about knowing where Mary Thomason lived.
‘No harm done. I’m off, then.’
‘Tomorrow?’
‘Yes, tomorrow, absolutely tomorrow.’
‘Kettner’s again?’ They were going down the stairs. Atkins, coming in, held the door for her. They made their arrangements and then she was gone. Denton went back to work.
Albert Cosgrove’s manuscript was a painful, sometimes bewildering thing to read. There was a story — or there had started out to be one — that had been infected by Denton’s outline, which the writer had apparently tried to blend with his own tale. The result was like a crossing of radically different strains, producing a monstrosity.
Or perhaps it would have been a monstrosity anyway. Denton guessed that Cosgrove wasn’t able to concentrate. This seemed contradictory in somebody obsessed, but the obsession, he thought, was not quite the same as what he was writing: that is, the story — novel, novella, whatever it was meant to be — was about obsession but it was not the object of obsession.
In the story with which Cosgrove had started, a young violinist who wants to know the ‘secret’ of greatness steals a violin bow. It belongs to a famous violinist who becomes a menace — never explained or defined — that looms over the young man. The bow does make him ‘great’ but it comes at a cost — a demon, who appears each time he plays. The demon takes a payment each time — first, the ability to sleep; then boils that appear on the violinist’s face; then the use of a foot. However, by that point (which, for Denton, happened far too soon — Cosgrove was having the non-writer’s problem ‘making it long enough’) Denton’s outline had been forced in, and a wife appeared, domestic scenes that had no connection to anything else were added, attempts at Denton’s sort of realistic detail were tacked on. Then the demon announced that he wanted the wife for himself, and then a page — the last — seemed to suggest that the demon and the ‘great’ violinist from whom the bow had been stolen were the same, or somehow connected, or at least in communication.
The prose was bad. Too many words, Denton would have said, too many long words, too much pretentious pseudo-philosophy. Some of it reminded him of Wagner, whom he despised. When Munro put his head in — Denton was reading, as promised, at New Scotland Yard — Denton groaned.
‘Not delighting you, is it?’ Munro limped in. ‘Getting anything? ’
Denton held up a list he had jotted down. Munro took it, raised it towards the gas, tipped his head back. ‘“Intelligent, incoherent, educated — Latin, Greek? reads books — knows mine well, also Shakespeare, poets; young — doesn’t know real life; never poor, never hungry, never married.” Sounds like most of the lads at our great universities.’
‘I think he’s unbalanced.’
‘I could have told you that without reading his slop.’
‘You’ve read it?’
‘Tried. That’s why we called on you.’
‘I think he’s trying to make a fable about himself and Art with a capital A — something about having ability but not making it because of some older fellow who’s in the way, the older one being there through magic. Except the magic is also the Art — he’s pretty confused. The idea might make it as a kind of horror tale — my editor’s speciality — but Cosgrove can’t do it. He wants to be a great writer — or thinks he wants to be — but people like me use our magic to keep him unknown. Does that make sense?’
‘He might try some honest work.’
‘He doesn’t know what work is.’
‘Well off?’
‘There’s a sinister female who wanders through it. I think she represents something, but I’m damned if I know what it is. But she’s always “richly dressed” and “glittering with jewels”. He hates her, but there’s no reason why.’
‘So you’re Harlequin, with the magic wand.’
‘Violin bow, in his case — not so far off.’
‘So, he’s spying on you to find your magic wand.’
‘He may have stolen a pen, in fact. Sort of like a wand.’ Denton stood and stretched. ‘He doesn’t really believe all that, at least not yet. I mean, he’s writing a tale he knows — has to know — is fantasy. So he’s sane, in that sense. But doing the other things he’s done — spying on me, following me, breaking into houses — they aren’t sane.’
‘We’ve an entire category of criminals who do nothing but break into houses.’
‘But they’re after things of value. Things they can sell for money. They’re sane — criminal but sane. We understand the motive — it’s the basis of society and the Empire, right? Make money. But not Albert Cosgrove.’
Munro put the paper in a pocket. ‘You done, then?’
‘Hell will be having to read that thing again.’
‘I’ll have your list copied, give it to Markson.’
‘It won’t help.’
‘What would help is an arrest. He hasn’t followed you, I take it.’
‘Ask your people. I see them behind me all the time. Call them off, will you? I’m sick of having somebody always looking over my shoulder.’
Munro laughed. ‘They were walked off their feet yesterday. One of them told Markson he was going to take up a collection to pay you to take a cab — hadn’t walked so much since he was a constable. I’ll talk to Markson about pulling them off — may be too soon yet.’