Like Wilson again—or Simak—Raphael is the true-hybrid breed of news-SF man, deriving his fiction largely from the other side(s) of his double (or triple) life. (Covered AEC and rocket tests at Los Alamos and White Sands for seven years; the Nuclear Reactor Testing Station in Idaho for five; member of the National Association of Science Writers; now handles science-oriented legislative projects for his senator.) “The Thirst Quenchers,” title story of his first book (Gollancz, 1965), was the bastard brother of a documentary film on water problems which won a National Radio and Television News Directors’ Award for Boise Station KBOI and writer-director Raphael; both pieces came out of “six years of riding snow cats, and plodding ungracefully on skis and snowshoes in the company of the Columbia Basin Snow Survey supervisor, learning and reporting the vital mechanics and sciences of his art.” His first novel, Code Three, about the highways of the future, will be published this spring by Simon and Schuster.
“Sonny” (which has also been reprinted in Analog III) is a different kind of story—I think. It is true, however, that Raphael put in eleven years as an Army career man (coast artillery private to armored division infantry officer, via the paratroops, cryptography, a bit of interpreting, and World War II). I have no reliable information about his background in ESP.
SONNY
Rick Raphael
Private Jediah Cromwell was homesick for the first time since his induction into the Army. If he had gotten homesick on any of at least a dozen other occasions during his first two weeks in the service, he might never have gotten beyond the induction center. But the wonders and delights of his first venture beyond the almost inaccessible West Virginia hills of his birth had kept him too awed and interested to think about home.
When Cletus Miller headed up the trail to Bluebird Gulch, Ma felt him coming around the bend below the waterfall a mile across the gorge. She laid down her skinning knife and wiped her hands clean of the blood of the rabbits Jed had brought in earlier in the morning. “Sonny,” she called to Jed, “trouble’s acoming.”
Jediah crossed the corn patch to her side. “What kinda trouble, Ma?”
“Cletus Miller’s comin’,” Ma Cromwell said. “He ain’t been up here since the week afore your Pa died. I don’t know what it is but it’s bound to be trouble.”
A few minutes later Miller hallooed from the bottom of the garden patch, then trudged up to the cabin.
“Set and rest, Cletus,” Ma said. “Sonny, fetch Cletus a coolin’ dip.” Jed ambled down to the spring sluice and dippered out a pint of clear, mountain water.
“Got mail fer you,” Cletus said, waving an envelope. “Guvermint mail. Fer Sonny.”
Two weeks later, Jediah swung down the mountain to Owl Creek, carrying a small sack with his good clothes and shoes in it. The draft notice was stuffed into his overall pockets along with biscuits and meat Ma had insisted he take.
“Go along now, Sonny,” she had directed him, “and don’t you fret none about me. The corn’s ‘most ready. You got a good supply of firewood in, more’n enought to last me all winter. If your guvermint needs us Cromwells to fight, then I reckon its our bounden duty. Your grandsire and greatgrandsire both wuz soldiers and if’n your Pa hadn’t gone and gotten his leg busted and twisted afore the guvermint called him I reckon he’d have been one, too. I’ve learned you all I can and you can read ‘n write ‘n do sums. Just mind your manners and come on home when they don’t need you no more.”
In Owl Creek the first real part of the excitement hit Jed. He had been as far as Paulsburg, twenty miles farther and that was almost as big as the county seat at Madison. Now he was going to go even beyond Madison —right to the city. And then maybe the Army would send him more places.
The Army did.
Everything had been wonderful, almost overwhelming, from the moment he boarded a bus for the first time in his life until he arrived at Fort McGruder. He could hardly believe the wealth of the government in issuing him so many clothes and giving him so much personal gear. And while the food wasn’t what Ma would have cooked, there was lots of it. He liked the other recruits who had ridden down to McGruder with him, even though a couple of the city fellows had been kind of teasing.
He liked the barracks although his bunk mattress wasn’t as soft as Ma’s eiderdown comforts. He liked everything—until the sergeant had cussed at him this afternoon.
Now Jed lay on his bunk and counted the springs on the upper bunk occupied by Private Harry Fisher. It was close to eight o’clock and the barracks were full of scores of young soldiers. A crap game was going on three bunks away and across the aisle; another country boy was picking at a guitar. The bunk above sagged with the weight of Harry Fisher, who was reading a book.
Jed’s mind kept coming back to the cussin’ out he had gotten, just for not knowing the Army insisted on a body wearing shoes no matter what he was doing. Jed had never been cussed at before in his entire life. True, Ma never hesitated about taking a willow switch to him when he was a young ‘un, or a stob of kindling when he got older. But she always whupped him in a gentle fashion, never losing her temper and always explaining with each whistling swing of switch or club, just what he’d done wrong and why this was for the good of his immortal soul.
Thinking about Ma, Jed got homesick. He closed his eyes and looked around for Ma. She was stirring a pot of lye ashes over the fireplace and when she felt Jed in the cabin she closed her eyes. “Sonny,” she said, “you in trouble?”
Lying on his bunk at Fort McGruder, Jed smiled happily and thought back an answer. “Nope, Ma. Jest got to wonderin’ what you wuz doing.”
Whatever Ma was going to say was lost amid the yells and growls of the men in the barracks as the electricity went off. “Who turned the lights off?” Fisher cried from the top bunk. “It’s not ‘lights out’ time yet.”
The noise jerked Jed back to the present and his eyes opened. The lights came on.
“Where are the dice,” one of the crapshooters barked. “I rolled a seven just when the lights went out.”
The noise died down and the game resumed. Fisher lay back on his bunk and went back to his book. Jed’s mind reached out for home again. “Ma,” he called out, “you say something?”
The lights went out and the yells went up throughout the two-story barracks.
Jed opened his eyes and the lights came on.
At the end of the barracks, Corporal Weisbaum came out of his sacredly private room and surveyed the recruits. “Awright,” he roared, “so which one of you is the wise guy making with the lights?”
“So nobody, corporal,” a recruit sitting on the end bunk answered. “So the lights went out. Then they come back on. So who knows? Maybe the Army ain’t paying its light bills. I had a landlady back in Brooklyn who usta do the same thing anytime I got late with her rent mon…”
“Shaddup,” Weisbaum snarled. “Maybe it was power trouble. But if it happens again and I find out one of you monkeys is bein’ smart, the whole platoon falls out and we’ll get a little night air exercising.” He stalked back into his room and slammed the door.
The barracks buzzed angrily for a few moments. Jed sat up and peered up at Fisher.
“That there officer shorely don’t talk very nice, you know that Harry,” Jed said.
Fisher laid down the book and peered under his thick-rimmed glasses at the lanky mountain boy.
“How old are you, Jed,” he asked.